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I Remembered Yesterday by °jsenn:iconjsenn:





I Remembered Yesterday
by jsenn

A smile slipped softly across
my face several times today.

Each time, I remembered...

I remembered yesterday.
It rained all day long
and we watched the world
slowly vanish in a crystal
view of water washing
across the window pane.

I remembered making love
in sweet seclusion, silence
kissed by silken movements
our hands in rhythm to the
motion of the water.

I remembered thunder
rumbling in the distance
and our laughter filling
the room as passion
became exhilaration.

I remembered the first
time, that tender moment
encircled by your arms,
surprised by my emotions
which have become oh, so
satisfying.

--- and ---

I remembered words.
Yours. They mixed with
the raindrops, some
slow and soft, some
intense and pelting.
I felt them dance as
sea mist swirling
twilight across my
body, playful, elegant,
powerful,

and a smile slips softly
across my face.

Joy Senn
3/4/2002
©2002-2009 °jsenn
:iconjsenn:

Author's Comments

. rain . time . words . smile .

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:iconeuphoria:
uhhhhhhhhh YUMMY! Joy you and your delightful, sensual little poems are a delicious little morning treat. =) (Smile)
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:I AM HORNY!!! :
http://euphoria.idleplay.net
Come visit me.
:icondreamz13:
That's just too delicious! And I enjoy every little line as "a smile slips softly across my face".
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:iconapfa:
you are... VERY good with words.
i am in love with the words.
your use of words.

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if you do not dance i will not be a part of your revolution
:iconnamaste:
Reading this was pure delight, and I savored its sweetness as of a rich exotic fruit. I'm with Euphoria- what a marvellous poem to color the winter light of my morning. Thank you so much. :) (Smile)


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O friend, understand: the body
is like the ocean,
rich with hidden treasures.
Open your innermost chamber and light its lamp.
-Mirabai
:iconubu:
Shew, I am a little suprised at how passionate this is. Of the very few poems I have read by Mya Angelou, this reminds me of their clean sexual tone.
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:iconkeen:
woah.

and you say that I have erotic imagery! :) (Smile)

all i can say is wow... and that this gives me hope for the future- to someday find satisfaction in the long term relationship.
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:icondeejbard:
"I felt them dance as
sea mist swirling
twilight across my
body, playful, elegant,
powerful, "

Your words stay in my mind like memories of a summer twilight. God, this is so beautiful.

I always find rain, and storms in particular, so erotic, too.

This is one of my favorites of yours, Joy-woman.

-- Deej

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The great artists of the world are never Puritans, and seldom even ordinarily respectable.
H. L. Mencken

http://deejbard.deviantart.com/

:iconspunj13:
this is absolutely beautiful...you're back to your old tricks again. definelty a shining happy spot in amongst the rest of us angsty poets...thank you for bringing (hmm...this sounds corny but...) joy to the rest of us...
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.:spunj13:.
editor, asylumpublications http://ionscribe.rmes.andrews.edu/~cmalo ney

tired of living with people who are tired of living
:iconorbital:
Reading your loverly poems always puts me in the best mood.
Makes me float just about the ground in a little bubble of dreaminess.

Thanks for sharing this.
What a lovely way to start my day.

I love it.


-orb Rose
:icondeejbard:
i just had to come back and say it again -- i cannot stop reading this poem.

Rose

-- deej
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The great artists of the world are never Puritans, and seldom even ordinarily respectable.
H. L. Mencken

http://deejbard.deviantart.com/

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