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Elizabeth's Song
by jsenn

"The Ants Go Marching" plays over
loud speakers. She turned three
last summer strong and full of life,
she loved to sing and march in little
girl steps to her song. "the ants go
marching one by one, hoorah, hoorah"

Child-Pink color had been deftly
applied to cheeks which once
needed none to express her joy
and happiness with life.
"the ants go marching two by
two, hoorah, hoorah"

Screech of brakes, glass against
metal, her aunt was taken first.
In agonizing cries Elizabeth's
song was silenced...

"the ants go marching three by
three, hoorah, hoorah"

Valiant efforts nor a mother's
wail could rescue the body of
a tiny little girl,
but in the end, before she left,
eight others were given life by her.

"the ants go marching eight by
eight, hoorah, hoorah"

Forgive me.
In the second song
I felt the mother/child and ran
I could not bear the awfulness
in that lonely pain.

"the ants go marching nine by
nine, hoorah, hoorah"

Outside, I listened to the birds
chirping in the trees. I heard the
traffic move along city streets,
life goes on, life goes on, life
without Elizabeth's song.

"the ants go marching ten by ten,
hoorah"

Joy Senn
4/19/2002
:iconjsenn:
I attended a child's funeral, today.
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:iconfillerbunny:
Angela called me a pot-head.
but i still like this poem.
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:iconbubblz:
It is always heart-wrenching to hear of anyone's death, but especially that of a child. My heart cried for Elizabeth and her family as I read this poem. It's wonderful how in the middle of a poem about a child's death, you incorporated how she gave life:

"but in the end, before she left,
eight others were given life by her. "

While I know it's impossible to make the pain of losing someone go away....a tribute such as this will surely comfort...

Excellent work Joy!!

Just remember that Elizabeth is above in a world of splendor, love and joy and I'm sure as she looks down at us all and sees this lovely poem, she too is filled with love....for you Joy!

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:iconsymonx:
Anyone named Elizabeth must be a goddess. Then again, I am biased. ElizabethFaith is my goddess.
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:icondreamz13:
Very sad indeed, though the insertion of the ants' song does soften the blow a bit. A child's death must be the saddest thing in the world, for I feel that the childhood is the most wonderful stage of our life and having that taken away from us is just so sad. But I also like to think that this is how those little cute cherubs come from. For aren't all children little angels in disguise(though some might believe that they are little devils, but isn't heaven and hell just a thin line away?)?
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:iconrebelchic:
sad...youve captured the emotion greatly...just...greatly
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:iconspunj13:
how sad...really brings the emotions out and makes us swallow hard....i don't usually get moved like this with poetry....but you got me this time...*swallow*....*blink*...all right...excellently written....

.:spunj13:.

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:iconnovacaine:
All I can say is this hit really hard and I can feel the tears welling up behind my eyelids.
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:iconchaosboy:
:( (Sad)

Im trying not to cry but I can feel the tears in my eyes. Having dealt with a young child dying before, I know how terrible it is. Its something none of us ever want to deal with, something no one should have deal with, specifically the child. I want to tell you how good that poem was, how emotional you made it, but it's so hard to say anything else but swallow the lump in my throat....

May Elizabeth's song still proudly play.

Jesus....:( (Sad)
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:iconmastermindg:
this is so sad, very heartfelt and emotional. now this is bittersweet, i think, with the almost mocking childrens song playing almost as if in the background, behind the painful story being told. :( (Sad)
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:iconbonhomme:
~bonhomme Apr 21, 2002   Writer
Truly tragic... you have written beautiful words to remember and hold this event.
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